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Review:adluvshp says:
hey!

This is AditiDraco95 from the forums with the review you asked for. Firstly, I'm awfully sorry for the long wait I'd to put you through!

Now, coming to the review,

Since its the prologue, its supposed to be an introductory chapter and i think you've written it very well. I don't seem to find any errors at all, no grammatical mistakes, no sentence formation mistakes, the characterization seems to be good (yet; I say this 'cause till now you've only introduced 2 characters), the flow is well-placed, the scene overall is quite realistic, so all in all, its quite good.
It especially engrosses the reader and makes him/her want to read more, which is a pretty awesome thing since its just the first chp (or prologue).
Great start, and I think i would like to read more of this fic =D

Thanks for dropping by my review thread!

10/10

Cheers!
AD

Author's Response: So glad you liked it, thanks so much!

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