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Review:ravenclaw_princess says:
Hello, sorry for taking so long...but anyway

That was such a mysterious chapter and I really liked it. It definitely left me wanting to read more.

The chapter flowed well and the pace was good. Right from the first paragraph you set up an air of mystery and secrecy that continued to the end.

The way you wrote the italicised passage was really nice. It was full of descriptions and metaphores and it was lovely to read, it it contrasted well with the present day scene.

Grammtaically, I didn't notice any issues so well done.

Overall, I though this was a nice prologue. While brief, it really has set the story up. It is very well writen and quite captivating. If you would like me to review more, repost in my thread with a link and I'll defnintely come and take a look.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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