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Review:VioletBlade says:
Hello there, I thought I'd review this since I saw it in the Review Tag forum at HPFF.

I don't normally read anything with Pansy or Draco in it, mainly because everything is either very cliche or just the fact that I never really liked Pansy much as a character in the books. However, your story has gotten me quite intrigued. I think that although you were worried about perhaps going out of character with some of them such as Pansy and Draco, I don't think that you did too badly. I strongly maintain that people can change, and since the last time we saw Draco was at the platform nineteen years after the war was over and even that was very little interaction between him and the trio, it is possible he could have changed. Especially, I believe, after the birth of his son, Scorpius.

Though I am not a parent, one could assume that becoming one would greatly change the way you percieve things in the world which is why when you wrote that Pansy would do anything for her daughter even though she was an annoying stuck up girl in the books is plausible to me.

Anyway, this is definitely a good start! I'd like to see where you take the story! ^_^

~VioletBlade

Author's Response: i very much believe that people can change over time. especially considering the things that happened in the book. i try to see it from all different sides really. from the trios perspective pansy and draco were pretty much horrible people. but to others they seemed pretty well liked. at least within their house. there will of course be interaction between the slytherin and gryffindor side where they don't get along, but at some point everyone has to grow up. and that's something i plan on showing.

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