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Review:MaiWishes says:
Well I'm certainly interested in this story. Hmm what can be happening? Haha reading the beginning my first thought was Ewww Pansy Parkinson Scorpius's mother? But then I thought can it really be that? What evil are they talking about? So yes, quite interested. Ive never read any Draco fics because I've been put off assuming everyone will get him out of character so yours is the first one :D

And you must think very highly of Draco to make him head of the department of mysteries. Does he do any of the actual research or does he just run things? Also you seem to be making Pansy a likeable character, JKR hated her so we should see how shes grown up and chaned but thats probably where you are headed anyway.

The only actual writing I can comment on is the part that says 'attached to the head of one Luna Lovegood.' That sounded weird and out of the style of the rest of the chapter, it puts me in the mind of a satire style but maybe its just me.

Not much I can give constructive wise, but its a good chapter to me


Author's Response: haha no she's isn't his mother xD she has her own daughter, but she's not scorp's mom. this is your first draco story? wow O: i love draco stories haha xD he just seemed right for the part of head for me. though that really isn't of any importance to the story. maybe later but not now. pansy is one of my favorite characters to write about actually. i see so many stories where she's mindless and i like giving her a new voice. anyway thanks for reviewing!

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