Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:MaiWishes says:
Well I'm certainly interested in this story. Hmm what can be happening? Haha reading the beginning my first thought was Ewww Pansy Parkinson Scorpius's mother? But then I thought can it really be that? What evil are they talking about? So yes, quite interested. Ive never read any Draco fics because I've been put off assuming everyone will get him out of character so yours is the first one :D

And you must think very highly of Draco to make him head of the department of mysteries. Does he do any of the actual research or does he just run things? Also you seem to be making Pansy a likeable character, JKR hated her so we should see how shes grown up and chaned but thats probably where you are headed anyway.

The only actual writing I can comment on is the part that says 'attached to the head of one Luna Lovegood.' That sounded weird and out of the style of the rest of the chapter, it puts me in the mind of a satire style but maybe its just me.

Not much I can give constructive wise, but its a good chapter to me

~Wishes

Author's Response: haha no she's isn't his mother xD she has her own daughter, but she's not scorp's mom. this is your first draco story? wow O: i love draco stories haha xD he just seemed right for the part of head for me. though that really isn't of any importance to the story. maybe later but not now. pansy is one of my favorite characters to write about actually. i see so many stories where she's mindless and i like giving her a new voice. anyway thanks for reviewing!

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Submit Report:  





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net