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Review:Capella Black says:
Awww, this is lovely. When I started it, I thought it would just be a standard love story - it was only when I got to the later sections that I realised how much broader your scope was. I love how you've captured the different meanings of love - romantic, familial, soul-mate/friendship, and a love of something, of a concept. It's a really beautiful way of telling it, how each girl tells the next, and how each one knows of love in a different way.

I also love how you've incorporated French into the story - the section numbers and certain concepts that don't have a simple translation, but not an excessive amount that would have distracted from the story. Subtly done, and that's why it works!

So yeah, all in all I like it a lot! Nothing much of use in terms of constructive criticism... just bits to definitely keep!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for this! I'm so glad you liked all the different ideaas of love, I hoped that would come accross well! also so happy that the french worked and you liked it overall! thanks so much!

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