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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Ykai,

I love it that Ginny REALLY knows her brother and is tuned in with his feelings. I didn't really think about it until I started writing fanfic, that Ron is the only one of the main characters that have siblings. Draco, Harry, and Hermione have no one. So in your story... Ron having a sister that knows him so well... is heartwarming to me. And... losing a brother is something that the other three mentioned will never fully understand.

It is excellent that you have Draco and Ron sharing an unexpected common issue... nightmares. I don't know if they'll ever know, but you have divulged this information to your readers... and I find it very fascinating...

Next chap please.. :)

Dark Whisper
P.S. My Delilah chap got rejected (my dumb fault) so everyone will have to wait until Thursday or so... oh well... hopefully everyone will forgive me after they read it. :(

Author's Response: After all their family had been through, it's hard to imagine them not being close. And I have to agree with you there. The other three may feel a loss with a close friend dying but it isn't the same when it's someone very very close to your heart.

Rona and Draco, as well as the others, are more alike than they realize. All of them have seen and experienced things way beyond what is expected in their age.

Aww, no matter. I shall be patient in waiting for your next chapter. I'm afraid I won't be posting for a few weeks. Family emergency. I have to learn to adjust to the new shift in my life. I did post the 3rd chapter though. Hope it goes through without a glitch.

ykai
^^,


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