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Review:mellypotter1223 says:
this was a really good story, but im sad that rose and scorpius never got back together. i feel like the story had so much more life when they were in love and then they fought, and i expected that once rose heard him out, she would run into his arms and take him back. they had decided to take it slow, but they kinda halted instead. their love was almost anticlimactic. like we build up with all this passion and love and anger, and then it just dissipates, and then they're friends? i feel like the story really slowed down after the wedding, and that it lost its purpose. time just kinda kept going with nothing of excitement anymore. the story is really well written, but after the wedding, it did lose a lot of detail and angst, any of its initial feeling for that matter. i just wish there was more drama of rose battling her feelings, instead of the focus changing to her career so abruptly. love like rose and scorpius' doesn't just go away that fast (and yes it was fast). there is a fine line between love and hate, and after ending hate, it should have slowly BUT SURELY returned to love (a kiss, another sexual mishap, anything!)

Author's Response: The story is not yet over. There is still room for something extravagant to happen.

I completely understand where you are coming from. I'm going to attest to the amout of time that spanned from chapter to chapter. By having these long periods of time between writing different chapters, I must have lost some of that muse you noticed in the earlier chapters.

However, I'll think you'll see with the 25th chapter that I might have gotten back into that way of writing you witnessed in earlier chapters.

Thank you so much for being honest and writing a very good, constructive review. I truly appreciate it. I hope you continue reading. :)

Thanks again!

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