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Review:Awy says:
That's it? I had expected it to be a little longer ...

Just kidding. XD

Well, that was funny. It took me a few seconds to get the ending, though, but that might just be me being a little tired. Anyway, nice short story. No need to write a novel of response this time.

Nice language, not confusing, and a funny ending. To say it shortly: Everything a good short story needs to have. You seems to know more than just a few Italian words; have you been there on holiday, or are you Italian, or is it just all thanks to Google Translate? (You don't need to answer, I know I have no right to ask you).

(If it's okay to add something to your answer to my former comment, then I'm flattered you like my English. But yours doesn't seems textbookese to me, either. And to answer your former question, I'm also from Europe).

Very original story, I haven't seen something like this on HPFF. Hope to see some more stories from you soon. ^^

- Awy

Author's Response: Dear Awy,
Thanx for reading the story in spite of the fact it's not a Dramione. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
I'm not Italian but I've been to Italy several times and I'm in love with that beautiful country. I used to speak Italian quite well but now I've forgotten a lot of words.
Hope to hear from you soon,
Hugs xxx

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