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Review:LilyFire says:
You can’t just leave me there. WTH? I need more.
Hem. As I was saying, Hi, Lily here with your review. I thought this was a great story, you brought me right in. The flashback was done well, flowing nicely with the story. To not have written in two years, you’re doing a wonderful job. The characters seem fine to me. Actually, the entire story seems fine to me. I only had one problem, when you wrote, “present upon gift” I thought it was a bit awkward. Instead, try ‘present upon present’ or ‘gift upon gift’ as the other way it’s a bit odd. Other than that, you have a near perfect chapter. It’s a great story(:
Well, I guess that’s it for now. Feel free to rerequest(:
~LilyFire

Author's Response: thank you for reviewing! omg that part xD i was saying it out loud to myself and no matter how i said it, it just felt so awkward. maybe it was just me that thought that though lol. i'll change it :)

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