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Review:ob sessed says:
First of all, that was incredibly adorable! All five stories!! I especially liked your use of French. I read some of these stories and I feel it can be a tad forced... but you incorporated the language perfectly and simply. Your use of the quote as well fit every part of this story to perfection. It was beautifully told and adorable overall. Okay I'll talk about each section cause I want to :P

Fleur/Bill - I have never read a story about them before... or at least how they met. You made it so realistic and I felt like that is really how they met. It makes so much sense as well. I loved their little exchange and your description of how Fleur perceived Bill. It's wonderfully simple. Characterisation-wise, I thought you did a great job with portraying a different side of Fleur. I always found that other stories made her out to be so... snotty and Bill wouldn't marry a snotty French woman. He's a Weasley, he needs someone like the Fleur you described here :)

Gabrielle - I think this is my absolute favourite. I like the twist you put to Gabrielle and how she ran off to be a dancer. That's so different and cool. I also really liked her anger.. well not like, but totally understood her anger at her sister and her family. It just seems to fit perfectly, especially for a girl at her age. Teenagers, so angry at the world, haha. But why I love this one the best is because the end with her watching little Victoire twirling about... then realising that this is her niece. Again, so simple yet beautiful.

Victoire/Teddy - Adorable!! Haha sorry I need new adjectives, but it was adorable. I really like how they're best friends and how she's angry at him then when he's near her, she lights up despite herself. It's sweet to see young love blossoming even when they don't realise it.

Dom - I really liked the favourite aunties thing you have! I think it's so unique and original. I really liked that Ginny is her favourite aunt and I giggled when Ginny evaded the question of where the baby came from. Very clever ;) I think the flying and Dom realising who she was and wanted to be in that moment was very well done.

Overall, beautifully written story. Adorable. Sweet. Endearing. Great job, luv. xxx

Author's Response: Awww I nearly teared up when I read the review, you're so sweet, especially to go into such detail!! It's only fitting that I would reply in great detail too :D

Fleur/Bill - I was so worried about this one, I was never sure what i thought of fleur, especially since. for some reason im absolutely certain this is how they got together!

Gabrielle - This and dom are my favourites, I'm so glad you liked it! I thought the idea might be a little weird and AU, so im glad it worked! And so glad the anger (hehe i think were the same age preeah!) came accross well, and the love at the end :D

Victoire - i thought this one was so silly, but hoped it would be in a nice way! they're 10 and 11 after all :D

Dom - Haha I'm so glad you like the aunt thing, its secretly like that im my family! hehe glad you liked that! I have great plans for Dom in the future!

What a lovely review, thanks again!!! Glad you enjoyed pet x


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