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Review:Timechild says:
Interesting start to the fic.

I like how Draco is taking to the teaching position as well as his attitude to Hermione. Hermione's position was nicely done.

A few thoughts

1. definalty should be definitely. Correcting that would be good seeing as it is the last word of the chapter.

2. A little more detail would be nice. Share the main character's feelings when all this happens. For example - Hermione notices the change in Draco's demeanor. How does that affect her? What is Draco feeling? Things like that. It would add punch to the chapter.

Just a thought or two.

Overall, nicely done. I look forward to the next chapters.

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