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Review:Mintleaf says:
Hello! FINALLY hear with your review (again, I'm really sorry)...

Grammar/Readability:
I don't think there's anything to say here. Not even anything minor :)


Characterization:
I like all your character names! Especially Athena and Artemis (I'm a big fan of Greek Mythology)! You know also, it's kind of funny that Athena reminds me a touch of McGonagall (just in her seeming practical and capable and quite sharp in her speech; all good things). Especially when you consider Athena is Minerva. Was that intentional or am I being ridiculous? haha.


Plot/Flow:
You write so dramatically haha! I like it :)

I like that there's restrictions on an apparation license! It seems much more realistic :)

I really like reading aspects of the book that we didn't get to see purely because the books focussed so much on Harry. I'm also always a fan of seeing familiar wizarding names incorporated into stories. So all-in-all I really like this so far! :)

Author's Response: It's okay, I forgive you. Especially after the lovely review :)
I'm a bit of a Classics nut myself, so I'm glad you picked up on those mythology names. I've never thought of Athena as like McGonagall; much as I would love to take credit for the name thing, I really just named Athena after the goddess :P
I'm glad you like the little details; I enjoy putting my own little spin on the wizarding world and the aspects of it that JK didn't cover :) Thanks for the review!


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