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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hello! RandomRed here from the forums!

Each section is really sweet and wonderfully written. It seems like you put loads of effort into each setion and they work together.

The one thing I would say to add to change is seperate them into chapters. Going through it the Une, Deux etc was a bit distracting stuck in between them and if they were seperated into chapters it would seem like seperate events more.

LIke I said though, each section is really sweet and portrays each girls thoughts and actions. They were characterised well and each one was different which I really liked. You didn't just do true love with someone you did it with other things, it was a great spin.

Ginny45/RandomRed xxx

OPERATION:Green With Envy

Author's Response: Hey! thanks a million from this!

I'm so glad it came accross well. I would consider making this into a short story collection in the future - I decided to upload all at one, it's for a challenge and I wanted it all up :D But excellent point, one I should follow theough on.

Thanks a million for the great comments, so happy all the girls came accross differently and the story was a little different itself!

thanks again!
- B xxx

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