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Review:strawberrydarhling says:
I really, really loved this.

You have portrayed the emotions of giving birth perfectly and have really captured the character, for I believe that this what Tobias and Eileen are really like.

Well done :) Can't wait to read some more of this!

So I'm guessing next chapter will be two or four??

Oh, and congrats on winning the challenge, you deserved to come first :)


Author's Response: Thank you SO much. :) Never having given birth myself (seventeen's a little young!), I'm glad that came across well - and THANK YOU for the comments on Tobias and Eileen!

The next chapter will be two, and then that will be followed by the (as yet unwritten) fourth. I'm afraid I won't be able to fix the order as I had hoped, but no matter! Thank you for leaving a review!

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