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Review:firefly910 says:
Hi :)
Firefly here with a review that you requested a month ago *hangs head in shame*

I know it was called Powerless but that one shot was so powerful.
Your writing style was very haunting, it had an almost rhythmic, hypnotic feeling.

You portrayed the feelings of anger, powerlessness and hunger for revenge that Voldemort would have felt brilliantly.

'A murder to feed my vanity' That is an amazing phrase, it fits Voldemort's reasoning for nearly all of his murders perfectly.

I also loved your description of the Death Eaters:
'the powerless who seek to prey on the gains of the powerful'.
Voldemort see's himself above everyone and that phrase emphasizes that brilliantly.

You said you were worried about flow. . .
Don't be.
It works, especially without dialogue, I don't think Voldemort would have had many conversations during those years.

All in all it was a very powerful, haunting one shot, perfect as it is about Voldemort.
Well done :)

Author's Response: Hi!
Wow! thank you so much! ! !
I struggled a bit getting Voldemort's emotions right, so I'm glad they came out right. and I love those lines! Thank you so much for the review! It made me really smile :)


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