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Review:Jazzeh Turnip says:
Hullo! I said I was reading this and now, look! I'm reviewing too.

"nubby" -giggles- such a funny word.

I love how animated Boris is. At first I thought he was Hagrid (you described him as giant, so I just presumed ^.^). He seems really gruff and angry at James but then he seems to genuinely care too. It's interesting. I'm kind of hoping James returns to him but at the same time I don't really know what's going on yet! Argh! Haha :)

Do you mind if I be a bit picky? "...causing a bit of cries of shock from on the other side of the wall." This sounds a little weird, and looks like you were going to write something else before you changed your mind and went onto something else. Just thought I'd point it out :)

I quite like James, though I'm still a bit unsure of him as you haven't revealed too much. He seems really troubled, but I don't yet know why. I need to know more! :)

I like how much of a mystery this is, and I think one more chapter and I'll be hooked. Very good start. I hope I remember to come back to this, so I can see the story really get underway. I like the chapter length too. I prefer reading short first chapters, so I can get hooked into a story first before commiting a lot of time to it. Well done :D

Author's Response: Jazzeh! You are so awesome at multi-tasking. And thank you for this awesome review! I will go back and fix that because I think you are right :P I tend to do that a lot. Your review is awesome and I love it. I will definitely update this soon and be sure to tell you about it ;D Thanks Jazzeh.

-Sarah


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