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Review:theelderwand says:
Capella this is just absolutely excellently heartwarmingly amazing!!

From Gin's "boy who lived line" to the "cake" euphamism and Lily having Harry wrapped around her finger, I loved it all. How cruel to have the misunderstanding during Harry's talk with Arthur. And the aftermath, and Rita's intrusions. All of this cautiously hidden in fairly tale terms (bugs! hehehe) was just brilliant.

The fairytale, if converted into a short story without the euphamisms, would be excellent too! Although I must say I love the form the story's in now. (So painful to read full length fics where the couple is divided by a horrible misunderstanding, but those tales are just so darned addictive.)

Bravo!

Eldy

Author's Response: Wow! From you, that means a LOT! I'm so glad you liked the format of this - all fairytales and euphemisms, as I wrote it in order to get practice at that way of writing (a story within a story, and a biased storyteller). So, yeah, for it to have vaguely worked is really nice to hear!

Not sure if I'll ever get round to writing this as a story proper, simply because I wouldn't know what new there was to add, and the remaining questions are ones I kind of like unanswered! But I completely agree about the addictiveness of them - will in fact be writing one as the sequel to Just Malfoy, just as soon as I finish all my other WIPs!

Thanks again for the thoughtful and encouraging review - you've made my day!


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