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Review:Mintleaf says:
Grammar/Readability:
Nothing to mention here again.


Characterization:
I thought Hiba was in Hupplepuff! Why else would she replace the Hupplepuff prefect?
Anyway, that's not very important haha.


I think Dumbledore's character is written much better here than in the letter.


Plot/Flow:
Well to be honest, there isn't a lot of actual plot happening yet. I suppose it's still a bit early. Hmm, so I'm not really sure whether I can make any comments here.

Author's Response: Haha, no she isn't in Hufflepuff, she's in Ravenclaw. Yes, a Hufflepuff wasn't replaced with Amy Robins because Dumbledore found that none of the other Hufflepuff girls had enough responsibilty to be in such an important position, and if you read this part in this chapter, Dumbledore told her he wanted her to be a prefect before, but he knew she'd refuse.
Thanks, it was easier to write him when he's actually there than in a letter, for some reason. :/
Oh don't worry, things will get better soon, I assure you. After all, they had only just came back to Hogwarts. :)


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