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Review:Mintleaf says:
Grammar/Readability:
Nothing wrong here! :)


Characterization:
'duck-like features.' haha this description amuses me to no end for some reason.

'They found us weird, me for my head-scarf and Jill for her inelegance.' this would include Lily right? I just can't see her character being so insensitive.

I like Lupin's characterization! He seems so adorable. :)


Plot/Flow:
Again, I am just really worried that the entire story is more about the hijab than about Hiba herself! It seems to crop up in every other paragraph and I'm really just worried that it is going to swallow both her and the plot line! Like I said in my last review I want to see more of the story and her actualy character, because I really do find this to be an original idea! :)

Author's Response: Hi again,
no Lily isn't included, she isn't in her House - I was referring to their other Ravenclaw dorm mates in that sentence.
Thanks, I love Lupin haha.
About the Hijab, well that is sort of part of her, and it really is important to mention it, as she's the only one in Hogwarts wearing it, so she would feel out of place. It also is very important to her, and that's why I tend to mention at times. :)


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