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Review:justonemorefic says:
Oh Scorrr~ You poor drunk puppy you. This fic just makes me want to run up and hug him and be all YOU DON'T NEED HER and LISTEN TO ALBUS. I like how Albus is there being a buddy as best as he can. And I quite like how it ends as well, with Rose not taking him back. Scorpius is in quite a state of desperation and you don't sugarcoat that in the least.

I think sometimes you could improve the words of some bits, like "I greet her exuberantly." I get what you're trying to get across, but I think it needs an additional line of description, to explain that kind of plastered look he has, if that makes any sense at all xD

Author's Response: Hey Gina!

I'm glad you wanted to comfort Scorpius; Rose was definitely too mean to him! :P

Thanks for the tip, I'll try and edit that in :)

-Sophia x

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