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Review:Happy Birthday! says:
This was so sad and beautiful! You captured the sisters' personalities so well. I can definitely imagine each of them acting the way they did in this story.

This made me think a lot about when the girls were little. You captured the relationship between Bella and Narcissa particularly well and the events that happened in this seem so normal. Even the darkest of wizarding families deal with every day things, such as a sister leaving for Hogwarts and another sad that she's leaving. It was so poignant. Lovely job with this! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

I was worried that the storyline was too simple or the characters too flat, so I'm very glad to hear that you didn't think they were. :) I'm pleased that the everyday aspect of it didn't come off as trite or, worse, boring.

Again, thanks for your feedback! Your review is very much appreciated.

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