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Review:Happy Birthday says:
She had laughed, a sound of a cobblestone city church bell and 23 canaries singing all at once Beautiful imagery, but I have to ask - why 23 canaries? not 24? not 22? I am so curious!

But yes, gorgeous description as usual. I can't help but sigh with delight when reading things of yours because they're so understated and yet so beautiful. You're a master of your craft.

In so few words you've painted a picture of the adorable relationship between Teddy and Roxanne. I love how she says no twice before saying yes and how he peserveres and how you've not told it from this overly tragic point of view. It's fluff at its best and cutest. Love it!

Author's Response: Thank you (both for the review and for the birthday wishes)!

23 canaries! Ha, I dunno. I suppose I just liked the sound of it. :) 24 seems a little clunky and boring, and 22 has a repeated letter when you say it that I don't want. So... 23. Specificity, non?

Anyway, thank you for your lovely comments. They've made my week.

xx Rin


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