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Review:celticbard says:
Hi JeanieLee,
I have to admit, I've never watched an episode of Supernatural, although it certainly seems like a show I would like, which is what attracted me to this fic in the first place. That and I also love well done cross-overs. ^_^ Unfortunately, the genre seems to have a rather poor reputation, but I think you definitely proved how untrue that reputation is with this fic. You really did an excellent job merging both fandoms. As someone who isn't familiar with Supernatural, I wasn't the least bit confused by this first chapter. Dean and Sam struck me as two very complex characters and I think the bit of back-story you provided for them was just enough to get readers interested in them.

The only slight criticism I have, and believe me, it's very slight, would be the pacing of the first scene. You did an amazing job introducing the two OCs, however, I felt the sudden intrusion of the demon set things just a little off-balance. The scene works fine as it is, although I think it would flow even better if you just slowed it down a little and added some more dialogue between Natalie and David.

Other than that, I really enjoyed this chapter, JeanieLee, and I'm glad I got a chance to check this story out. Good luck with this fic!

Best,
celticbard

Author's Response: Hey Lee Anne!

Oh, you haven't. Well, if it's the kind of thing you watch then I really recommend it. It's an awesome show. Yes, sadly they do have a bad reputation since there are some bad ones out there that seem to overshadow the good ones. But I'm glad that you believe that I prove that wrong. Yay, I'm glad you weren't confused since you've never seen the show, though I still recommend it. ;)

I was originally planing that scene to be a bit longer, to show more of the relationship between David and Natalie, but this story is definitely one of those that has taken on a life of it's own and very quickly too. The story has been calling the shots since the beginning. ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the lovely review!!


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