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Review:Aly Delacour says:
This is a really, really cute story! I love that they were trying to honour Fred's memory using a prank he would probably have thought of himself. It was a really nice touch using the Weasley twins' fireworks. It gave a slightly sad edge to the story even though overall it had a light, funny tone.

I particularly liked the professors' comments. I could completely picture Professor McGonagall with her lips pursed, complaining about the prank, though I bet deep down she found it funny and a nice reminded of Fred and George's time at Hogwarts. And I absolutely loved Flitwick's line 'I hope I'm in stripes'. I think it was just like Flitwick to see the fun side of it and not get as stressed out as the other teachers.

The way you wrote the kids was lovely, and you showed off their distinct personalities nicely, which is tough to do it a one-shot. They all seemed just how I would imagine them.

This was a very enjoyable story and I'm glad I took the time to read it :)

Author's Response: Hey Aly! :D

Thank you for this lovely review :D I'm glad you think I wrote the teachers and the students well. Flitwick's line is my favourite in the story, for sure :)

I'm glad you enjoyed reading it; thanks again! :)

-Sophia x

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