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Review:Aiedail says:
hi!!
i thought this was really well-written and silly :) it's something that i can easily imagine happening, although to me, the characters seemed to be younger than sixth- and seventh-years. it might just be because it was more focused on action than character development, which is fine! especially for a oneshot dealing with pranks.
i love flitwick here. he's probably my favorite character in the whole story, even though i think Lily is also fun to read. somehow i always manage to forget her in my next-gen stories. hm...strange, as we share a name! :)
i like that rose seems to take after her mother a little in her snappiness but also her willingness to take charge of the situation. i also like that scorpius seems to like her, but that is most likely me projecting my ideal-couple idea onto them :P i like that rose can loosen up at the end.
i would have expected to see a little more of albus, but it also wasn't too surprising to know that he had forgotten to wake up early since he's seventeen and all. although remembering what i do of harry before events--he always had strange dreams, or woke up early, easily, forgot to eat breakfast, worried about horrible scenarios, etc--it might be unfair of me, but knowing that albus is harry's son, i just figured he would take after him that way ;)
other than that i think that their idea for a prank is really silly and i don't think it seemed too implausible. i can imagine uncle george's pride :D
there's only one major source of confusion for me: is scorpius in slytherin, and that's why he says it would be unfair to pull a prank on them? i got the impression before that he was in the same house as the rest of them, but then that, and the fact that he wasn't in the room when lily went to wake al up made me wonder...
overall though it was an entertaining read and a wonderful prank :D good job, and good luck in the challenge ;)
--lily

Author's Response: Thank you for your awesome review, as always!

You picked up on some good points. Yes, Scorpius is in Slytherin and that's why he didn't want any pranks played on Slytherin House. It's in canon to my story 'The Sorting of Albus Severus Potter'. :)

Thanks again!

-Sophia x

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