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Review:Canadian_Hogwarts says:
That's right James! Don't prank the pranking master! Hehehehe. I hope James' mum made him clean up all the water afterwards... it'd give him more time to think up a new prank!
As a character, the eight year old James was exactly what I would expect, and as for his parents... wow! I never really thought about them before, but I really liked how you made his dad a prankster as well! It makes sense to me that it would be a genetic trait! If this is really your first attempt at humour, all I can say is that it was a grandiose success! Good job!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to review, it means a lot. :D

I definitely see James' mum making him clean it up, as well as telling his father to act his age, not his shoe size! James will continue his pranking in the future and (hopefully!) get better at it. Even the best have to start somewhere. XD

I am glad you liked James' character, because I found him quite difficult to write. The only real inspiration I have is my younger brothers and they are more annoying than cheeky. I always just assumed that James would've learned some pranks from watching his dad, or family member. I think children are mischievous anyway, but adding his Dad into it was quite fun for me.

Yep, first attempt at humour, I'm afraid. It's such a difficult genre; I'm used to sticking to my dark mystery. I am glad you think it worked, though.

Thanks for stopping by again! Have a great week.
-- Jordan

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