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Review:hpgrl says:
Hey sophia!
Firstly, I love the title of this story, its a nice, happy title that would definitely get me interested in reading the story. Overall, it was well written you're missing some words in a couple of places, like "a", and "the", and missing a comma or two- not really a big deal though. The flow I felt was a tiny bit choppy. I feel that you could've structured the it better and there are some details that are kind of unnecessary and tend to shift the attention away from the plot (like the part about Lily and David).

Otherwise it was great! The characterization was good, no grammar mistakes, and it was just a fun, light fic. to read.

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reviewing :)

This hasn't been betaed yet; I had to get it up in time for a challenge, but thank you for reminding me :)

Glad you enjoyed it!

-Sophia x

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