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Review:marauderqueen says:
Ok, so I decided to mix the two parts together to just leave one huge review, if you don't mind :P Ok, so I LOVED the bit with Marlene and Sirius in Part 1. It was so sad that Remus makes her feel alone and we all know how much he cares for her. And poor Sirius, I just want him to be happy!
Another bit I really liked was the bit where Avery sent a curse at the stag but the wolf got pissed and charged him. It's almost like they're still looking out for one another, even if the wolf doesn't actually know that the stag is James, it was so sweet. If I didn't make sense there, I'm sorry :P
AND WHAT! Marlene can't die! How cruel to leave it hanging like that! :L I was teary when I read the last few paragraphs about Marlene wanting a big family and how everyone was happy and she 'lay in the woods dying'. It was almost too much! Can't wait to read more, I may be late reviewing again because I'm trying to get my newest story going and I'm busy working on the plot lines. Hope to read more!
Big huggles
~Izzy

Author's Response: Hi Izzy! Leave reviews however you like! I'm so sorry for taking a whole MONTH to respond, but the next chapter is up now. Thanks for you patience and your review! I honestly appreciate it so much, and I shouldn't have kept you guys waiting like that!

There will be a lot more Remus/Marlene/Sirius coming up, so that is something to look for. What happened to Marlene at the end of this chapter is going to take its toll in strange ways. I'm sorry I left the chapter off at that!

Also, I TOTALLY understand about the personality thing when they're in animal form. Maybe not so much for Remus because he doesn't have a choice in his transformation, but I want the other boys to realistically be themselves even when they are in Animagi form :)

I hope your new story is going well! Is it up yet? I'd love to check it out!


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