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Review:CheeringCharm says:
waow... this story is really exciting, the long pre-thingie disturbed me a bit, I think you might want to have the story speaking for itself? because it's a really good one :)

I quite liked the part with the flashback tells us how things got to be the way they are, and of course the part at the table :)

watermelon? don't get the idea of it... maybe that his head is filled of water but otherwise...
haha

lovely story :)

*huggles*

Author's Response: Heya! Just about to go on to yours now!

That's a really good point about the note at the start - the story shouldnt be about me, it should be about Rose heehee! I'll definately think about either shortening it or thinking of this for my next fic!

I'm glad you liked those bits! Hehe the watermelon is just a random thing I saw in another story - its so weird and unconnected to anything as far as I can see!

Thankies! Hugs for you too!!!

- B xxx


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