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Review:NeverGotHerLetter says:
Awwh that was really sweet!
I loved the contrast in relationships, Lily/Severus was really calm and sweet, but also I felt really sorry for Severus at the end. It really was a great ending :)
And then James/Lily you did really well too :) I liked James' little comebacks, like the 200 per cent comment, it seemed a lot like him. And Lily just not listening to anything he said, that was a lot like her!
Overall, very good! I think you write Severus especially well :)
~NeverGotHerLetter x x x x

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!
I'm so happy that you think I write Severus well, he's my absolute favourite! (and yes I'm falling a bit in love with him while writing...)

haha I usually don't write in dialogues but this story just required it! and the characters just bounced into my head talking so that's the way it ended up :)

I really hope that you liked it enough to keep reading the next chapters, the second will be up when I've finished it (which will be soon cause I can't wait to see what happens!)

Thank you again
*huggles*


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