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Review:NeverGotHerLetter says:
Aww that was really sweet! Happy go lucky and just awesome :D Hehe I'm going against you for this challenge, and I'd say I have some stiff competition! ;D But seriously well done :D You characterised everyone very well, I especially liked Lily's blushing when the captain of the Quidditch team looked at her and then Albus' reaction, I thought it was real cute :)
And then when George sent the fireworks! Awwh that was cute :) I miss Fred so much, but I can only imagine how George is feeling :( (Yes, I treat them as if they're real people!) :) Anyway, this was really good, I loved having Scorpius there too. Am I right that you put the Potters/Weasleys in Gryffindor and then him in Slytherin, but even so they were friends? If I'm right then I think that was a really good small detail which just shows that the war united the next generation, and that thought just makes me so happy :)
So yes, overall, fantastic, I loved your idea for the prank, (I promise I won't steal it -- I'm yet to think of an idea yet!) Very detailed writing, a happy story and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it :) 10/10
~NeverGotHerLetter x x x x x x x

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reviewing :)

I'm so glad you liked this. I realised we were against each other when I read your story. You certainly are competition indeed. :)

Don't worry, they're real people as far as I'm concerned too! :P Yes, you're right about the Houses. I wrote a fic a while back about Albus, Rose & Scorpius' Sorting and they were sorted into those Houses. So I decided to keep it that way and, like you said, show that they can still be friends. :)

Thank you for your amazing review :D Good luck with your entry! I'll definitely be reviewing it!

-Sophia xx


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