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Review:NeverGotHerLetter says:
Oooh Ok, so here's your official challenge review:
Hem Hem :D
So first, Characterisation: I loved your characterisation of Rose :) I got a sense of the pressure she was being put upon, just because it was OWL year. A lot of people go through that so it's something that many can relate to so that was nice to see. I haven't seen it before either so that was unique. Also I liked that she was really uptight and almost jealous of and about everyone Scorpius was talking to :)
The way you used the Room of Requirement was brilliant too :D A nice secret hideout for Rose and Scorpius to love each other :) It's really sweet and I'm glad they got together in the end :)
For CC I would say just check up on the spacing again (even though that isn't really CC) and then also, you know when Albus is talking to that girl? What's the symbolism of that? I think you should make that a little clearer.
Hahahaha Watermelon! For some reason that seems like the perfect nickname for Hugo :) And I love that he was like, Hermione's little informer, telling on Rose all the time. I especially loved this line: Rose could see Hugo’s mouth drop. The little squeal – she’d have a howler by the morning.
Hehe that really gave me an insight in to Hugo's character :)
Then, Scorpius was great :) He was just so carefree and cool I think that was really nice.
And Al, to me he seemed like the womanising type, like he finds it easy to get a girlfriend and may well have a couple at a time. I might be wrong, but that's just my opinion, and I think it was a good unique detail if I'm right :)
So Well done!! I really enjoyed it :) 8/10
Thanks so much for entering my challenge!
~NeverGotHerLetter x x x x x x x

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review.
I remembered how stressed was at that ge, a few short years ago so I had to write that in somwhere. Hehe yeah she really was jelous - remember how jealous Ron always got about Hermione?? :D
Their use of the Room was probably predictable, but it always seemed to be the perfect place for them :)
Sorry, what girl do you mean albus was talking to? Scorpius was talking to Eva, Albus' future girlfriend, though there was nothing going on. I think Al THINKS hes a womaniser alright :L
I love watermelon - i didnt name him, but ive kind of borrowed him from hpgrl :D
Hehehe glad you enjoyed! And thanks for the CC!
- B xxx
Hehe good old watermelon,

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