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Review:justonemorefic says:
Awww how adorable! I adore how the prank went down. The teachers were all very good-natured about it and everyone had fun. And I love especially how you connected the pranks to Fred and his memory. The fireworks going off, that was a nice touch :) I always feel so sad for George, losing Fred, so it's nice to see him kind of keeping his memory with these fireworks.

It's a tad slow in the beginning, lots of explaining, deliberation and all that sort going on so it takes awhile, but you may perhaps consider condensing some it? I do love the bits with George though. And the prank overall has a very good payoff though. I think you've got a lovely, fun one shot here! :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reviewing :)

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for that bit of criticism. I'll see what I can take out when I edit it. :)

-Sophia x


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