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Review:gingersnape says:
Okie dokie, here's another gushing review for you! (I've kind of run out of thigns to give you CC on, if you havn't noticed yet :D) So, yes, it was predictable, yes, it was adorable, and no, there is no real problem with the whole getting together at New Years thing! :) And because this is a fangirly gushing review, I'm just going to split it up into paragraphs by ship!

Sirius/Tina: YAY YAY YAY! They kissed! Twice in a day! SQUEE! I loved how you brought in both the sweetness of their kissing and being all together, but then also the darker side of it with Tina wanting to make sure everything was hidden and her eorries about Sirius playing in the back of her mind in her happiness.

Emmeline/Remus: I had been secretly hoping for this ship for a while, though I didn't ever actually think about it no did I think it would happen, so I was very happy when it di happen! Yay!!

James/Lily: Finally! Finally, finally, finally! Oh I love how they got together and the line about embarrassing Liky was so sweet!

Spelling and Grammar: Other than the occasional typo, this looked pretty good!
Pacing and Flow: It kept me on the edge of my... bed? You get the idea; it was amazing!
Overall, this was definitely a squee worthy chapter and I'm getting sad we're almost done with this long review fest!
-ginger

Author's Response: Heyy, *does a little KERCHING thing with her arm because she has no CC*

Sirius/Tina: I was worried the kissing might be getting too cliched but apparently it works :P Glad you like that, as I do want to stop this form being a completely girly cliched love thingy by having the darker underflows!

Em/Remus: I think they are uber cute and couldn't resist giving them their kiss! They are just right for each other methinks.

James/Lily: Glad you liked it!

Edge of the bed is good, I think ;P
Aww, I'm sad that my response fest is nearly over also!

Lily :)

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