Oh my, well wasn't this an exciting chapter? I know I found it super exciting! And I still can't wait for this party everyone keeps talking about! :)
So, let's start at the very beginning! (It's a very good place to start...) Well, I don't have any CC about this chapter, so i think it's just going to be my opinions, and then ending with my condensed spelling and grammar, pacing and flow, and overall opinion. And I really really apologize for only having like 200-300 words in my reviews! I'm trying to get through them all and still have a little bit of time to sleep, so I'm not spending the usual half hour or fourty-five minutes each review deserves, and the quality is severly lacking. That, and it might get repetitive to get eleven reviews that are all 700-800 words long because there's only so much you can say in a few hours. Oh, and it's now nearly three, so I'm getting a bit worried if these even make grammatical sense. I apologize if these don't make any sense and are littered with typos. I'm not as good at picking them up in the hours of the morning than I am after a good long read through! Okay, I think my disclaimer is over, but good luck getting through the reviews! :)
So, Marlene is back, is she? *dies* This can't be good, especially if Bella's here again! I liked how Marlene was too cool for snow in a way, it put Tina over her in just a wee sense and made me smile a bit to know Tina was better liked by Sirius than Marlene as far as I could tell.
Speaking of our friend Mr. Black, the whole landing in the snow scene was adorable and then Bella's warning was so scary! There were so many emotions running through me all at once and wow, just wow!
Okie dokie, that's pretty much all I have for now because this was just a really good chapter as far as they go!
Spelling and Gramamr: was good! As always, it was the same is it usually is with the occasional "snow angles" (I love math typos! I squeed and considered asking you to keep it in if you edit for typos) but it's not littered with spelling and grammar issues, so you're pretty good! :)
Pacing and Flow: Smooth and entertaining
Overall, you guessed it, I liked it! :)
*tear* It seems I must leave this chapter for the next one! Wow, we really are getting close to the end of the posted chapters, aren't we? That's hard to believe!
Author's Response: Aha, the party will come, don't you worry! :)
Aha, I love the sound of music! Your reviews are still wonderful (though I can tell that you are lacking in sleep... :P) thanks so much for all of them, they really are appreciated!
Well, of course Sirius likes Tina better, he is not a complete idiot! :D Glad you liked the snow bit, and Bella hadn't put in an appearance for a while so I felt I needed to get that in just so you didn't forget about her!
Ahaha, I don't know how I missed "snow angles" but it's pretty hilarious! Maybe I'll leave it in, just as a little shout out for all the mathematically inclined HP geeks out there! (I know you're all there, you can't hide from me...)
Aww, it's sad, is it not... but the great news is more will be up soon!