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Review:Lana says:
Hey! I seriously love your fic! I think you depict the characters great...though if I may so sometimes your Albus seems to lack characteristics that would place him into Slytherin and seems more of a Gryffindor...though I may just think that because I always thought that he'd be in Gryffindor and never really liked it when writers had him in Slytherin, but I'm growing into it. Anyway, back to your story. I find it rather intriguing though you might want to consider to move things a little bit faster, not that it's not great to read just that you give details any self respecting book would have and only problem is this is a fanfiction. Have you consider how many chapters it could possibly take? Not that I'm complaining seeing as I really like your version of the characters. And speaking of, I adore Albus. I just adore him and I don't know if it's the Slytherin in me talking but I just wanted him to give James some more blows :P. Seriously though, I mean what's wrong with that dude?'s only that Albus is still his brother and even if he's resentfull to the fact that he's different, I don't understand how someone could be so mean to his own sibling. I mean it seems like he only likes Quinn because he wants to annoy his little brother and that's just mean (maybe he should be in Slytherin instead :P). I love Rose and Scorpius and how there's this undergoing thing that we all get but they'd never admit. It's brilliant the way you write them and still not make it too obvious. On one last note I want more of Harry...please? I just love reading about him parenting, though how he's going to sort out this mess I have no idea.
I wonder what's the deal with that Emily person and that hooded figure (I hope it wasn't a Death Eater). Oh and it's gonna be fun watching Snape (or rather his portrait) meeting young Albus Severus Potter. Hahahahaha...
Sorry for my small complains, but they're only that small and don't really change my view on your story, which is that you're a great writer and I love the fic :)
Okay, I guess I'm done. Talk about a big review...haha...I promise I'll try and restrain my self next time. Please post soon!!! I want to read more desperately! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, they make me smile. I admit, I am writing it to be a novel so it will be a bit long (trying to write in the style of one school year = one book like JKR). Not saying I've got seven books ready but I've got this one written up top in the ole noggin. As for the rivalry between James/Albus. I have two younger brothers and A LOT of inspiration from them to help. Posting the next chapter tonight and working on writing chapter seven (the christmas one! Surprise to come there which makes me smile). It will probably end up being maybe 15-20 chapters long when all is said and done. Don't know how long it will take to finish as it's been mainly a way to get the juices flowing for my regular (non-fan fic) novels (Currently stumped about 2/3 of the way through book two of my series). Well, now I'm rambling! Hope you continue to enjoy! Thanks again!

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