SQUEEE, CIARA UPDATED!!! :D
And WOW! This was one amazing, incredible chapter! So fast-paced, so much happened - I couldn't look away! As usual, hehe :P
The imagery at the start was just sickeningly beautiful. It flowed so well, I really felt what Draco was going through. It's something that is probably going to stay with me - it was just so memorable! And slightly haunting...
Another canon character! I love how all these familiar names keep coming up throughout this. Like I said before, it just ties it more firmly in with the HP world. I think Cho was a great choice here, and for what little we saw of her, she definitely stands out.
I love your description. Seriously. It's just so incredible, I could read it all day and never get bored. Everything is just so clear! I can see everything that Draco sees, and it's so powerful for an author to do that, but even more so when every single line of every single chapter is written so amazingly.
Yay, he's found Rose! The poor thing, I feel so sorry for her. She just seems so scared and confused! I loved how you kept Draco still sort of cold towards her - it just seems so realistic.
The (sort of) fight was just WOW! It's like a thriller, hehe, I was so engrossed! I thought is was genius to compare the guy to Crabbe and Goyle, as it really helped me picture exactly what he was like.
"she sticks out in the crowd like a bloodstain in the snow" - that line is just pure awesomeness. Incredible! I have never seen such a dark, yet beautiful simile. Just...wow.
And you left on a cliff-hanger!!! Which was kinda evil yet kinda perfect, hehe. I really cannot wait to see what happens next!! So you must update or I will go crazy XD
Perfect and amazing chapter, hun! I loved every word! ^_^
Author's Response: Gah! You've definitely convinced me to continue updating this fic regularly. Sorry, now you're stuck with me :P It isn't entirely written yet but soon will be. My muse comes back reading your reviews!
Actually, I wrote Cho into this fic because I realized one day that I accidentally included her in my character listing. When I went to remove her, it kept telling me my summary was too long no matter how much I edited it. So I ended up just leaving it and writing her a part, but then I really liked it :P It was really good luck for me, I think. For the same reason, Harry will be making an appearance as well, though I won't say in what capacity :D
Rose is not one of our very smooth main characters. It's the nature of the story, she is not a very sweet, smart victim. She's a little dim, to be honest, but she's innocent, so he has to allow her that.
I will update this week, I promise! Thank you so, so much love!