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Review:celticbard says:
Hi JeanieLee,
I was checking out the TGS review tag thread and thought I'd drop by to take a look at your story. You know, I have a weakness for dark fics with intense plots and morally questionable characters and this chapter contained all of the above. I already like Aron. For some reason, he seems slightly different from the rest of the Legion members. There's something thoughtful and sensitive about him that I was really able to connect with. And I have to admit, I felt terrible for him when he had to watch Kara die. His desperate attempts to save her were quite heart-wrenching.

In addition, I'm quite intrigued by this Legion organization. I love the fact that you haven't told us whether they're the good guys or the bad guys yet. Although they seem dedicated to stopping dark magic (the necromancer, for example) I'm not sure they're motivations are entirely virtuous. And Soren himself is quite a mystery. Even though he killed Kara, I do feel like he was only attempting to defend himself.

This was a solid start to what promises to be an interesting fic. I'm glad I had the opportunity to read it. Good luck with your writing!

Best,
celticbard

Author's Response: hey Lee Anne! Yay! I get a review from you! :) I'm glad you like him. He's very fun to write. And yes, he isn't like the other members. Yes, that part was very hard to write because I like him so much. But I'm glad that you were able to connect with him and felt bad for him.

Yes, more about them will be revealed later in the story. That is what they are dedicated to yes and more about what Soren did and why they sentenced him to death will be explained later. Keep reading and see if you feel that way about him later ;)

Thank you! I'm very glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks for the lovely review Lee Anne!


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