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Review:orderofthephoenix says:
Hey!

I wouldn't usually read something like this; something which has no dialogue whatsoever but this was really good and managed to keep my interest.

There was a lot of imagery and description that worked well with this.You used an interesting variation of vocab and managed to sum up a decade of his life in 1300 words which is pretty good :)

To be honest, I actually thought it was from Nagini's POV at first before I realised it was actually Voldemort!!

'I felt powerless'. That is the most perfect line to end this. It encompasses everything he usually isn't portrayed as in three words.

Well done for writing this. You did a good job. :)

-Sophia x

Author's Response: Hi Sophia!
Thank you so much! I can see why it you'd think it was Nagini's POV. That might be a good idea though, writing from Nagini's Pov. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for commenting on the last line, the whole story, for me, seemed to just be working up to that line.

Thanks for the review :)


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