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Review:long_live_luna_bellatrix says:
Hi there! This was a really interesting view of Voldemort's exile and the steps back up. The last line really hit the nail on the head. Naturally Voldemort would be hugely afraid of a powerless feeling. Even more when it's sparked by a toddler, then a gangly preteen.

It felt a little rushed at times, you certainly could have drawn things out more and taken advantage of all the possible imagery included. However, there were a few key spots that were still well done. The malleable Death Eaters, for one, was a good a point. Also the way Voldemort focused on his goal to get through the days of nothingness.

As I mentioned, there was plenty more to be said here. However, you did get a nice start, and it was a clever one shot. You did a brilliant job of getting into You-Know-Who's head, at the very least, and I could see that you put a lot of thought into it. :)

Author's Response: Hi lllb!
Yeah, I can see that I did rush through some spots- thanks for pointing out! Some of the descriptions need to be expanded on, I kind of reached a standstill with some parts though and found it hard to draw it out longer.

I love the last line! I'm glad you commented on that :)
and that I've at least succeeded somewhat in getting into voldy's head.

Thanks for the wonderful review!


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