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Review:Aiedail says:
hey! i actually read this story before, but didn't leave a review... :( bad lily!
anyways, i'm back now to let you know that i really like this! i'm so biased and prejudiced that i usually skip right over songfics--usually the literal interpretation of the story of the song drives me absolutely crazy--but i think this song helps in that the story is a little ambiguous, and your writing is good enough that i almost didn't need the lyrics there :)
i like your characterization--the only problem is that i see that albus is trying to be a good friend to scorp, but i would think that he'd have more to say about why he should get over rose, something from her point of view, perhaps! it's not really necessary--your story still functions successfully without this--i was just a little surprised that he wasn't coming up with some kind of excuse on her part ;)
again with the biases, but i sort of automatically like a story that doesn't end how you want it to--of course i want rose to let him in, listen to him--but like in real life, she doesn't and he has to deal with it, even though he clearly doesn't believe he'll make it out alive! i think the thoughts are realistic--being one who has tendencies towards the melodramatic when i'm having a hard time, i find his hopelessness not overdone and particularly apt for the situation.
although the turns were rather sudden, i can see where you're emulating the song in this. it all works! i really like the end result :) you're a great writer, and this, like your other stories, is very lovely to read.
--lily

Author's Response: Hey Lily!

A lot of people don't read many song fics so I'm pleased you decided to review this :)

Perhaps when I get around to editing this, I will include a little more from Albus defending Rose.

Thanks for your lovely review, again! I'd say you certainly do deserve an award for best quality reviews :D

-Sophia x

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