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Review:huffleherbs says:
SexGod!Sirius is quite overdone, and this isn't canon. That could put a lot of readers off on initial reading, although it's generally quite well written so I imagine that people will see past that. I understand that this was written pre-DH, so I won't comment anymore on minor inaccuracies in the plot.

I like that she isn't head over heels in love with James initially or suddenly, it's best when that romance blossoms slowly. The language could be more descriptive and you could go more in-depth with relationships if you choose. The grammar is fine and the plot is good too. Keep writing and resubmit if you'd like me to review more chapters, as I only review one at a time! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing so quickly. Honestly I didn't think I characterized Sirius as a sex good, just a popular, good looking boy. I thought I made it clear that he actually wasn't like that - just that girls perceived him that way. Thanks for the other tips!

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