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Review:huffleherbs says:
First of all, you need to put a real chapter summary to let readers know whats going on (and it looks neat!).

There are a few misspellings in here, have you considered applying for a beta? They could help with grammar and spelling, as well as general plot issues.

I think there are a few things you might want to look at: like the reason Mrs Lynn leaves Hermione to read the paper. It would be a lot more realistic if she just sent Hermione into a waiting room to read it!

I like the idea of witches or wizards being able to leave the wizarding world and join the muggle world! It's very interesting and imaginative! I'd be interested to see a little more description and to know how Hermione is feeling about the whole thing. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Hey! (:

I know I need a beta, I'm hopeless at proff reading my chapters I'm usually good with grammar and I'm really good at noticing when others get it wring but can never seem to find my own mistakes which sucks for this (and when handing in Alevel coursework!)

The next chapter explains the reasons behind her decision in more detail...

And yes, I think it's a nice thing that it's open to all whiches or wizards (above 17) no matter what blood-status (wouldn't it be funny for a Pureblood who'd never seens a kettle before!)

Thanks again for the lovely review (:
Melliex

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