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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Yay, an update after such a long time. I had really started to miss this story... I was actually considering going back to reread it a few days ago so imagine my surprise when I see that you updated it when I got home from work tonight. And I love that Harry has been conceived in this chapter... baby Harry is almost in the picture now. I can't wait to read James and Lily as parents.

And, ugh, Sirius is so stubborn. He SIRIUSLY needs to quit denying Christina about moving into his flat because he does love her. He definitely has some issues about letting people in too much when it comes to his life because of his family issues growing up... poor thing. A part of me wants to give him a big hug while the other part of me just wants to slap him upside the head for continuously fighting with Christina over why they should or shouldn't live together. He's acting like a complete idiot about it all and I'm glad James called him out on it like he did.

Oh, and the bit about Frank and Alice made me laugh so hard. Seriously, Alice's flirtation and bluntness over baby-making and Frank's embarrassment over her behaviour toward him in public (i.e. work place) is just downright amusing and I have no trouble at all picturing their relationship as such. They are such an awkwardly cute husband and wife. Love it. Makes me smile.

Anyway, I suppose I should end this long and rambling review here before the word vomit spews out more of a mess than it already has thus far. Great chapter and I hope the next chapter update comes much sooner than this one did. But as usual, this update most certainly did not disappoint and I love the long chapters as I never want to stop reading when it's a story like this that has my eyes glued to the computer screen. Any hoo, again, excellent chapter and keep writing! 10/10

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