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Review:jennyangelface says:
Ahh, I remember reading this story, but I never left a review the first time. Sorry about that. But I'm here now :)

I thought this story was very fluffy, and a refreshing take on next generation quidditch stories. I am actually surprised no one write more stories where the Potter children are full of themselves, considering that they are Harry Potter's children. I especially enjoyed reading it from an eleven year old's perspective. It seems no one does that either.

I think that you made the story very believable throughout. The whole time, I felt like I was really listening to a First Year speaking because even your sentences sounded so First Year. :)

Also, you said that you don't really write humour, but this story made me smile. It's like one of those more subtlely humorous stories, but you know, not that subtle. Anyway, before I go off rambling about the different nuances of fictional prose humour, I'll just stop and say that it was funny.

Keep writing. :D

Author's Response: Thank you for returning -- it's so brilliant you left a review! In my head the Potter children couldn't be anything but stuck-up. Perhaps not to the same extent, but all that media attention must have affected them somehow.

I love writing eleven-year-olds. I am eleven at heart (seventeen? no! never!) so I feel at home. And I'm glad I sound like a First Year too! I love hearing that I'm writing realistically. And I've become better at humour, I think. I'm getting the hang of it at last.

Thanks again! xx

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