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Review:Chello says:
WHAT?!?! That's IT? I feel deprived of what happens next ): lol I love it! It was the "Perfect" story to read before taking on your novel. ;D Other than a few grammatical errors, I thought it was A-mazing. (seriously though... what happens next?)
As a graduation present to me you should continue the story! haha!
Anyways, thanks for the wonderful read. I enjoyd it a lot.


Author's Response: Hey Chelsea!! Aww, I'm so glad you liked it! At least this way now you'll have a head start on the background information for Saleena in AiNFiL&W, lol!! I went back and reread this just now, since I knew that you were reading it too, and yeah I saw all the grammar things too. *sigh* I thought that I had gone back thru and fixed all of those at one time, but it must not have gotten saved or something... Looks like I'm just going to have to do another edit again soon then, heheh! :)

As for what happens next, well it's obvious really. Sirius gets blames for Lily & James' murders and is sent to Azkaban for it, remember? So when Saleena comes back from her studies in America, as you will see in the novel, she ends up just burying herself in her work for the rest of her life. ='(

Yes, yes, the ending of their story here is a tragic one, I know... But I am NOT the one who wrote it - it was J.K. Rowling who creates the dramatic ending, lol! Trust me; I would have much preferred it if Sirius would have been able to have a fair trial and been allowed to live, haha!! ^_^'

Thank you SO much for the review Sherry - rofl! I can't wait to hear your thoughts on the BIG story now as well, after all these years, lol! I really do hope that you like it, haha!! =)

~Deana~
AKA: Your fuhther!!! =P


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