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Review:AquariaJasmyne says:
Hello again!! :D

Wow, gosh you're talented at writing! This was just so amazing, and so dark, which I love ;) You kept me guessing what was going to happen the whole time, and it flowed so beautifully. (I love flashbacks, hehe :D)

I loved how in the present day, the pace was so controlled. I think is was because of his smoke, and whether it was your intention to use it as something to fall back on or not, either way it was simply fantastic!!!

I loved how smoothly your flashbacks were written, and the transition was really quite flawless. The little lead-ins were just perfect, and really added to the seamless flow of this :)

Your characterisations were just totally awesome, in a dark way. Anotonin was written so well, and his thoughts were so chilling. I love reading about Death Eaters and how they act away from the killing, and I think you have done a superb job on him.

The twins - WOW! Even though it was told from a Death Eater's point of view, they came across as so strong and their fight was incredible. I really loved how it wasn't too 'bloody', too. The teeth part, although it was a tad scary (I'm a bit of a wimp...), really just made Antonin come across as an even more powerful Death Eater.

his piece was so flawless, I'm just astounded. Everything was written so beautifully, sometimes in a sickeningly way, and I just absolutely LOVE it. Definitely adding this to my faves ;)


-'Lizzie-Claire' xo

Author's Response: Lizzie-Claire is back again, and once again she brings the power to make me cry. =']

I don't even know what to say in response to this that will do my feelings justice. THANK YOU, THANK YOU! And yet the sentiment extends much further. ^^ I am so glad you liked this story!!!

THANK YOU! *super-duper mega squish* xoxoxo

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