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Review:louise_loves_hp says:
Hey there,
I really like the way that you have laid out the story and the way that it is flowing. You have written this well but one thing I kind of got loss on is when you are talking about Mr and Mrs Weasley at the end of this chapter, I dont understand who you mean? But other than that cant wait for the next Chapter and we saw Albus yay! I still dont know who I am rotting for out of James and Al but have to say more Al at this stage...

Operation: Green with Envy =]

Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much! :)
Lol, I didn't want to write who the Mr and Mrs Weasley are as I wanted to make it obvious. But also, at the same time, to show that actually any pair of Weasleys can fill in the spots ( Aren't they all a little hot-headed? ;) ). :) But, personally, I was thinking of Hermione and Ron when I wrote that part. :) So, there you go, mystery solved! ;)
I love those boys, both of them. :D Of course neither one is perfect. But that's the fun part!
Thank you again and keep reading. ;)


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