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Review:AquariaJasmyne says:
Here again! Hello, Ciara ^_^

Wow! What an incredible chapter! This was so fast-paced, I was yet again on the edge of my seat. Man, this story is amazing!

The diary entries are still so interesting to me! Really, I love them, and it's a brilliant way to open each chapter. It just keeps me guessing as to what the next one will be!!!

I adore your descriptions. The way you wrote the rain was just so beautiful! And the club...I just felt like I was right there, amidst it all!

This was a really dark side of Pansy. She still surprises me! I admire her for showing up, but at the same time think she's rather silly. She's stubborn and independent, so I hope she knows what she's doing :) I do love how she plays mind games - it just adds another intriguing thing to this fic :D

The way you write that fight was incredible! I felt every emotion, and was so engrossed by it. It brought out harsher sides to Draco, and at the end, some more of the vulnerable Pansy were seen, which was so realistic :)

I loved the labyrinth bit! You wrote it really well (as usual, hehe :D), and I didn't get lost at all - everything was perfectly visible, which can be hard when dealing with mazes. It seems so intricately planned, which just makes it even more awesome.

Eeek! Cliff-hanger! Wow! Now I'm kind of worried. And Rose is still missing! Oh my, this is just so addicting! And you even made being hit by a stunning spell sound beautiful, too! Hehe :D

Well, I adored reviewing this incredible story, and I hope these reviews were coherent between all the squeee-ing. :D I really am in love with this story, and honestly cannot wait until you update! Hope you have a great weekend, hun! *huggles*

-Lizzie xox

ps: OPERATION: GREEN WITH ENVY!

Author's Response: She is definitely silly, madame Pansy. She does everything she can to deny not just the world and those she cares about, but herself as well. In some ways she is continually punishing herself for her past, and for her attachment to Draco, but she ends up punishing him as well. She's just a very hostile kind of girl, in her own way. But Draco understands her perfectly, so he knew when he had to dig a little deeper at her for her own sake. He knows when she goes a little overboard.

I know, I am trying not to overdo my cliffhangers, but sometimes you just have to throw one in :D This story is winding up to a climax and so it will be getting more tense. I don't want to give anything away, so I shall say no more.

Thank you times a thousand!

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