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Review:AquariaJasmyne says:
Hello :D *waves*

What an awesome chapter!! This was so engrossing! It was just...wow!!! :D

These snippets from Draco's diary are just a story in themselves! They really intrigue me, and I really am looking forward to seeing where they take us, hehe :) I loved learning more about the Dynasty and where they got their name.

Gosh, you write Draco and Pansy together so well! You can change the mood in an instant; it's amazing! I thought this chapter was amazing for Pansy's characterisation, too. I just saw a bit of a more vulnerable side, and it sort of made me feel sorry for her.

I loved seeing Draco in his element with getting information out of Pruell. I thought it was sweet that he did it for Pansy, too. I get the feeling that they do care about each other, but not as deep down as they would like to think.

You've really captured the Dynasty and what it encompasses really well. It's sort of like the night job for a few social climbers, like Pruell. It's like the mafia, and you really have given it the elusive, elite air.

Yet another fantastic read, Ciara!!! This just gets more and more amazing :)

-Lizzie xo

ps: OPERATION: GREEN WITH ENVY

Author's Response: I decided to make the diary entries go backward just as a different way of explaining backstory. I got tired of having him talk it all out and it makes more sense for this kind of story to have the actual progression of the story go continually forward.

Yeah, Pansy does in fact go deeper than she seems. And Draco knows it, but he is also acutely aware of how fragile she actually is. She seems incredibly strong, but she has weak points like anyone else, and he does try in his own way not to hurt her. He knows when she lashes out at him that she is really defending herself, and he allows her that.

I will give you this about Draco and Pansy. In this story, they're about all one another has, and they care about one another about as deeply as they can. But they also have absolutely no idea how to translate that into action, so they end up hurting one another, sometimes even on purpose, simply because they don't know how to do anything else and the opposite, to them, is unthinkable. They are so used to defending against their vulnerabilities, they don't even realize how far gone they already are on one another.

Thanks love!!!


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